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I've seen books big and small
I've seen buildings short and tall
I've seen buildings once very tall
I've seen things that make them fall
I've seen things that fails to care
I've seen people away from there
I've seen planes big and small
I've seen buidings crash and fall
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911by =RedsunsRun

Scraps©2009-2013 =RedsunsRun
A short poem composed by me. Please let me know your thoughts on my poems and stories.

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Very nice poem, better then anything I could ever write! :O
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=RedsunsRun Jan 28, 2009  Professional General Artist
Thanks very much! :)
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:iconplathix:
No problem at all.
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